全球微动态丨让ChatGPT修改我十年前的英语文章，发现太牛了！

最近在准备的英语课，发现ChatGPT在帮助英语学习上，的确能发挥很大的作用。今天就介绍一个很有用的功能：修改英语文章。

为了做这个实验，我找出了一篇我在2014年12月写的文章，参见《》。对了，这应该是本号最早期的英语文章，是我自己写的，差不多十年前了。

首先回顾一下我十年前写的文章的主要内容：记录了我刚刚开始写公众号的感到的挑战与不安，记录了公众号关注数突破1万人的见证，以及到底是写自己想写的文章，还是写受欢迎文章的思考。最后结合自己以前的经历，升华落脚点是，要把握住每一个细节，因为都是自己的代言。

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这基本上就是一篇小的短文章，我把这篇文章提交给了ChatGPT，二话没说给我反馈了修改的版本。下面我选两段对比一下，大家也感受一下ChatGPT。当然，修改完以后，你也可以问ChatGPT改了什么。

原文：At the inception of this year, driven by a thrust of inspiration along with tentative determination, I started to write articles. I was not sure how far I could go. The only certain thing was that I could manage the writing within the expected short ranges of date ahead of me, due to the writing topics that I was quite familiar with, namely English learning, interpretation and so on.

修改：At the beginning of this year, fueled byinspiration and a tentative determination, I embarked on the journey of writing articles. I wasn"t certain how far I could go, but one thing was clear: I couldhandle writing within the short-term deadlines ahead of me, considering my familiarity with topics such as English learning and interpretation.

解析： 1、我当时用inception，就是想秀一下词汇，给我改回了简单词 2、driven by a thrust of 改成了fueled by，这个表达我之前用的少，挺好 3、embark on thejourney，以前会用，但是十年前应该是没想到用 4、but one thing was clear，这个用的好，喜欢 5、managewriting改成 handle writing 6、short-term deadlines代替了我原来有点绕的表达，这个更简洁 原文：It was just like a Penelope"s web when you woke up in the early morning realizing you have to write at least one passage a day. To alleviate the daunting apprehension at times, at the outset, my strategy was to jot down whatever came to my mind in the process of writing. Indeed this was mind-easing, and it helped me survive early stages of writing.

修改：It felt like Penelope"s web, waking up early in the morning knowing I had to write at least one passage a day. To alleviate the occasional overwhelming apprehension, my initial strategy was to jot down whatever thoughts came to mind during the writing process. This served as a mind-easing technique and helped me navigate the early stages of writing.

解析： 1、用it felt like的确要更好 2、overwhelming要比daunting更好 3、served as a...这个要更符合英文的表达习惯

服了！服了！

这两段看完，你大概就知道ChatGPT的水平了。总体来说，ChatGPT可以优化一些英语的表达、替换一些词的用法，并且往往可以找出更贴切你想表达意思的方案，在很多地方仿佛在提示你“我们会这样表达哦”。有这些其实就足以成为你的优秀英文教练了，可以不断帮助你提供英语使用的流畅程度。

记得我在大一的时候，为了提高英语，有一段时间挺困惑的，我还专门找我的大学英语老师帮忙修改我的英文文章。那个时候，我为了练习我新学会的词，刻意在文章中使用，老师还对此批评了。不过由于有老师的指点与修改，这段时间我进步很快。

现在我的感慨是，如果我大学时代，有ChatGPT就好了,我一定会把ChatGPT的内功学过来的，那列位现在看到的就是一个中英双语畅销书作家了！

最后附上ChatGPT给我修改的原文、对比截图以及ChatGPT的修改概要。

ChatGPT还有什么好用法，欢迎在评论区分享。

原文参见《》

修改后的文本参见

At the beginning of this year, fueled by inspiration and a tentative determination, I embarked on the journey of writing articles. I wasn"t certain how far I could go, but one thing was clear: I could handle writing within the short-term deadlines ahead of me, considering my familiarity with topics such as English learning and interpretation.

It felt like Penelope"s web, waking up early in the morning knowing I had to write at least one passage a day. To alleviate the occasional overwhelming apprehension, my initial strategy was to jot down whatever thoughts came to mind during the writing process. This served as a mind-easing technique and helped me navigate the early stages of writing.

However, deep down, I recognized that merely satisfying my own needs wouldn"t be enough to captivate and engage the public. There would always be a trade-off between the topics I wanted to write about and the quality required for an article to become widely read and shared.

Throughout this journey, I have worked diligently to strike a balance and achieve coordination. The need for such balance has grown as the number of subscribers to my WeChat Official Account has reached a record high of over 10,000.

Recently, during a conversation with a friend in Beijing, he emphasized the importance of organizing and preparing every article on my public account. This includes paying attention to even the smallest details, such as layout, diction, and the selection of related photos. Each piece of information should hold value for the reader since they have taken the time to open my passage and therefore deserve a rewarding experience.

This conversation provided me with great inspiration. I recalled the advice my supervisor gave me when I graduated from school and entered the workforce. He emphasized that everything you deliver speaks for you. In your team, the results you produce and present to others represent you. Your credibility is built on the quality of your work. Failing to meet others" expectations often leads to a bleak career prospect.

The principle is simple, yet fully understanding and implementing it is far from easy. Our laziness and inertia often hold us back from taking the initiative and achieving excellence. We frequently settle for mediocrity with excuses like \"this is good enough\" or \"I am tired and need a break.\"

However, in the realm of team collaboration, success can only be achieved when all members give their all. An individual"s reputation also relies on consistently delivering high-quality work in the long term.

Therefore, it is crucial to ensure that every detail counts.

对照的文本参见

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